Wolfie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[spirits]

Like the other two reviews said, the main thing you should worry about is the delivery. I like your flow, I like the lyrics. Just give a little bit more feeling when you record your verse and you should be fine. I can imagine you being pretty good with a little more practice. I'll keep an eye out on you.

Good beat choice, too.

Psilolysergicamine responds:

Thank you very much! I appreciate it and will most def work on my delivery!

[HDC: Doc vs Spawn]

I try not to review battles because I don't think I'm knowledgeable enough to know what I'm even talking about. But, if my opinion counts for anything, here it is. I'll keep it short.

DC, your delivery did need a little work. The flow was there, and you still had some nice lines, made me smile/laugh a bit. Just work on that delivery, give it some UMPH, and you'd be good, I think. You definitely had lines that relate to your opponent, so that was good.

WS sounded good in this battle. Maybe because it was his own beat his had to rap over, I dunno, but he sounded good. Good flow, good lines.

My vote goes to WS.

The "Yoga Flame" sample was good, DC, I liked it... and the "You Lose" sample was good, too. All in all, I was entertained.

HDC responds:

DR. - 0, WS - 5

[Nepton]

Not quite sure why it has such a low score, but this is a solid instrumental. Sample is nice, and the drum beat works. I guess I can see the whole 'repeat' thing being a problem, like King mentioned in his review, but I feel like the beat changes up throughout the song. It certainly doesn't feel like a simple loop to me.

Good work.

DesoloZ responds:

haters

[Concept Triage]

Goodness, that sample... I dunno if that's a clarinet or a bassoon or whatever, but I love it.

[Future / Wheels]

That's a beautiful sample. The drums sound a bit too hard/heavy for it, but I guess that's just me. Still sounds nice.

[-GM- Tesla]

Very mellow. It kinda reminds me of walking through the town in Silent Hill.

However, I will say that I wasn't really feeling the drums. Not sure how to describe it, but it sounds a bit too "strong". Maybe a smoother, softer drumbeat would've worked better (at least, in my opinion).

Still, a nice piece.

B-RadGfromOV responds:

I hear ya, but I was kinda hyped up, so that mixed with the mellowness of the beat.

["Cowbell"]

Like Fat Beats said in the hip-hop thread, I'd recommend you stay away from FL samples. There are tons of sites where you can get free drum hits, try googling around for a bit and collect some better sounds.

As it is, it does need some more work. It feels very simple, and, as I mentioned earlier, FL samples don't really sound that great. But you said this was your first beat, correct? You just gotta keep practicing, and you'll get better with time.

RazzleDazzleBeatz responds:

Thanks! I really appreciate the review! Yea, this is my first beat, and I now have tons of good kits and soundfonts to use. Thank you again.

[The Aegis Threat [ DDMT ]]

First off, fantastic beat.

Digging your flow. You sound really great. A few of your lines sounded off-beat (nothing too major), but aside from that, you sounded great. I'm really enjoying this. Good track, downloaded.

HeIsAlive responds:

Thanks man. I appreciate the honesty :D